how do you like my poem? Inspired by the movie The Mist



 *Kate*
how do you like my poem? Inspired by the movie The Mist
Unusual fog Strong storm passed, Destruction brought. The house is shabby, damn it! He needs an overhaul. With this we will wait, We need to go to the store. Catch new gossip And buy food. There are many obstacles on the way, Yes ... not an easy road. Finally got there, Everyone is already here. Having quickly typed the necessary, We got up, taking a turn at the cash desk. Suddenly the people began to fuss, Veglyad of all rushed to the windows. Everything around was clouded, It became smoky and white. That fog was ominous, The city was swallowed up in an instant. And he brought with him "guests" - Creepy monsters and animals. They began to attack, to frighten people at night. We held the defense, We didn't let anyone out. People soon divided, And enemies suddenly appeared. They began to choose a victim, To give those monsters. We decided to get out, It's dangerous to stay here. With a fight, we broke through to the door, We barely managed to jump out. They ran to the car And how the children squealed. The monster was waiting for us there. Suddenly he attacked! I kicked in the jaw with a swing And threw that beast away. He squeaked in annoyance, hissed and ran away. Everyone jumped into the car, so as not to see that picture. Cursing started the engine And rushed at full speed. What awaits us? What area? We all raced into the unknown. Soon ran out of gas. Eh ... the fog defeated us. We have to drown in it, So our path ended.

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Answers:

lex
Kishom smacks of

Artem Bochinov

Tatyana Isaeva
Kate! My advice to you as a poetry publisher is to do something else.

V. Afanasiev
Not everything is verse that rhymes!

Vladimir Dudko
Only children can like this rhyming.. I always thought that a poem should contain meaning, but here it is far from the poem, but the meaning is like the moon.


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